This my Queenstown story. Could you please comment if you think I used my goal in this story. My goal is I can use an onomatopoeia and I can use spicy adjectives.
Wow Harrison. You have worked so hard on this recount. You have used some good descriptive language such as "Bang! the plane hit the runway and the windows rattled." Your audience has so much information about what you did and can tell that you had an amazing time. Great work!
Wow Harrison. You have worked so hard on this recount. You have used some good descriptive language such as "Bang! the plane hit the runway and the windows rattled." Your audience has so much information about what you did and can tell that you had an amazing time. Great work!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Harrison.
ReplyDeleteA very detailed account of a great week.
Yoou should keep a diary of all your activities!
Grandad