I put this story on my blog because it is a small moments example and I have being learning about small moment writing at school. I have been working on showing thoughts and feelings. Can you see where I have included these in this piece of writing?
Today is my first day of school. So mum drove me to school and took me to my class. I felt excited. I put my bag in the cloak bay.Then went inside with my mum. Mum introduced me to the teacher. I was shy. Then mum said she would wait until the bell rang. I felt scared because I didn't know anyone. Then… the bell rang and everyone sat on the mat. Mum said, “have a good day”. I said ,“OK” "bye mum". Then I went down on to the mat.⚠️
THE END
by Harrison
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